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Nonsenseword1
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Post subject: Stellar Formation #2 Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:36 am |
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Joined: Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:16 am Posts: 306 Location: The Future! =D
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Sorry if I flick between POV's. I need to because I'm writing this as though it is a book being read by Fyler to an audience, however the author didn't include special information in the book, so Fyler then informs the audience of what they need to know to understand certain things. This also allows me to be able to write dialogue straight from the original thread and describe details that Flyer may have overlooked had he been telling the story. It's almost like the way Lemony Snickett writes, except he doesn't double as the main character.
Also, this is going to take me ages to write, and will not be updated frequently as there is a lot to interpret and alter for realism and to make the story good (e.g. get rid of the god-modding, explain absences from the board, patch up transport so that there's no instant teleporting, etc.)
Much thanks to Zslayer74. If you would rather me not do this (or would like to do it yourself), just let me know. --------------------------------------------
STELLAR FORMATION #2 (A story interpreted from a forum-based role-play)
Introduction
It was rumoured that one star distinguishes light from dark; good from evil. And that anyone born under its influence would be given a certain power. That - if bonded with others - could stand off against The Time Testament.
The Time Testament has arrived... The fight has begun.
You can never know too much... well, forget it. I'm like a mind reader. I can detect life's true essence. It induces a lot of stress though; I sense just about every distress call, feel every death, sense every life. But it will be a life saver later on. There are others like me. They either sense the unsensible, control the uncontrollable, or fight like no other. These are the Star Children.
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Arabian Knight
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Post subject: Re: Stellar Formation #2 Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 2:11 pm |
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I like the start. This may be the way for one of us to write about Fruit Wars, because though we have three stories about it currently (one of which is mine), none are being updated-save Z's.
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Zslayer74
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Post subject: Re: Stellar Formation #2 Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 2:13 pm |
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You're converting this from RP to Story?
Ok this might be a bit... Difficult...
I'll let you do this, just know what you're doing.
_________________ The best solutions are sometimes to compromise between two sides.

"I will always place the mission first. I will never accept defeat. I will never quit. I will never leave a fallen comrade."
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revenger210
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Post subject: Re: Stellar Formation #2 Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:32 pm |
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Hell, I remember this. It's what caused people forget everything else and concetrate on RPs!  But, hey, it was good I recall. Deep and all. Never got into it, but I remember some CYOAs spawning from it. Good luck, NonsenseWord1! 
_________________ "Confusion is but the ideal for signaling your missing knowledge about one thing or another. To be confused is a step of being un-informed. I am not confusing you, you just don't understand me. Hence, making it not my fault for distributing what I am saying, but yours for not understanding. I'm not calling you dumb, I'm just picking my words with the intention of discovering the insight of others into my words. I think it's a pretty interesting talent for one of 18 years." ~Era
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Arabian Knight
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Post subject: Re: Stellar Formation #2 Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:41 pm |
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Maybe a certain master of CYOAs will look into doing one for Fruit Wars... 
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revenger210
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Post subject: Re: Stellar Formation #2 Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 4:10 pm |
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Thank you for the compliment, AK. I was the King of CYOAs in plenty of other forums before and thereby I want to...
Oh, whatever, anyway. I don't think I'm into Fruit Wars today enough to fully understand it. I've stopped at the reign of Darth Banana and my sacrifice of the Cherries to kill the Evil Veggies.
Which has nothing to do with today's FW anyhow.
Which makes me a totally not-suitable writer for a FW story.
But, I'll tell you what, if you want to, I can give you instructions on how to do a CYOA. Passing on the skills to a new generation, oh yeah!
On-Topic now, I liked that intro, NW1. Do you have all traces of Z's epic RP? Wasn't that on AKT, which is now dead?
_________________ "Confusion is but the ideal for signaling your missing knowledge about one thing or another. To be confused is a step of being un-informed. I am not confusing you, you just don't understand me. Hence, making it not my fault for distributing what I am saying, but yours for not understanding. I'm not calling you dumb, I'm just picking my words with the intention of discovering the insight of others into my words. I think it's a pretty interesting talent for one of 18 years." ~Era
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Nonsenseword1
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Post subject: Re: Stellar Formation #2 Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:19 pm |
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revenger210 wrote: Do you have all traces of Z's epic RP? Wasn't that on AKT, which is now dead? Oh yea. (As opposed to what, doing it from memory? That would be insane.) It's closed, but if you want I'll promote you guys so you can go through the archives. Here you go
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Nonsenseword1
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Post subject: Re: Stellar Formation #2 Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:55 am |
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(I have no idea what universities or American schools in general are like, at all. Please feel free to re-write the stuff about the physics lecture for me. I'll probably end up re-writing and amending all sorts of stuff later.)
I remember when I first met Mike Thomas. It was a cold winter's day, and so everyone was wearing their various long clothes. I could feel it too, in my mind. People would stop at the taps to get a drink and think 'Man, that's cold.' Repetition of obvious statements is a common mental recurrence, so I tried to just ignore the cold and get on with my day.
I had a Physics lecture on particle physics explaining the effects of altering the speed at which a molecule moves. Pretty basic stuff, right? But it was almost the holidays, and our lecturer was prone to go off-topic. A few people listened in, and it turned out that Mike was one of those people, but most of the class worked on revision or slacked off. Like I said, I only normally sense darker emotions, and pay less attention to regular patterns, but it turned out that Mike was only here to study his limits.
As usual, I found a spot at lunch where I could sit on my own and get some peace. But Mike wanted to show off, just a bit. It's not in his nature to show off - normally he's more reserved - but as he approached I knew he was excited about something. He was only wearing shorts and a T-Shirt, but before I asked him if he was cold, I knew the answer. "Not really," he told me, "I guess you can get used it after a while." "Really?" I asked him, half-surprised and half-playing along. "Yea, well... I can handle it." "Okay," I replied, continuing with my... I think it was a chicken sandwhich. "Is that a chicken sandwhich?" Mike asked. "Uh... yea I think so," I said, and looked inside just to check. "Yea, it is," I added, remembering, "it was left over from dinner." "Oh okay, cool," he said, taking out his own lunch.
And then my chicken sandwhich became warm. It became obvious to me then. He was one of us.
"Did you hear about Larissa's party last night?" I asked, changing the subject. "Yea, I could hear it from my house," he replied, "but I just sort of... ignored it." "Me too. You must live further away then?" "Nah, I'm a heavy sleeper." "Lucky," I replied. I had an almost sleepless night. We continued our lunch for a while, before I asked, "So where do you live then?" "A few blocks over, on Lake street." "No kidding? Me too. Perhaps we could hang out some time?" At this he hesitated. "I've actually been quite busy lately. I'm working towards this project..." I nodded my head. The Time Testament was coming, and he had been testing his abilities. "Extra credit," I said. "Yea."
[UNFINISHED]
Last edited by Nonsenseword1 on Tue Jul 17, 2012 10:21 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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revenger210
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Post subject: Re: Stellar Formation #2 Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 5:22 am |
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Nonsenseword1 wrote: revenger210 wrote: Do you have all traces of Z's epic RP? Wasn't that on AKT, which is now dead? Oh yea. (As opposed to what, doing it from memory? That would be insane.) It's closed, but if you want I'll promote you guys so you can go through the archives. Here you goI thought they were a goner! Well, truth be told I'd love to be able to wander through the Archives. Who knows what kind of precious gems might I find there... 
_________________ "Confusion is but the ideal for signaling your missing knowledge about one thing or another. To be confused is a step of being un-informed. I am not confusing you, you just don't understand me. Hence, making it not my fault for distributing what I am saying, but yours for not understanding. I'm not calling you dumb, I'm just picking my words with the intention of discovering the insight of others into my words. I think it's a pretty interesting talent for one of 18 years." ~Era
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Zslayer74
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Post subject: Re: Stellar Formation #2 Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 3:11 pm |
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This RP reminds me always of my pure love for psionic and mental power.
Course Fyler's format was due to a "Professor X" obsession. Supreme Telepathy
Right now I'm in an "Eagle Sense" obsession. I'd love to be able to uncover the unnoticeable with some hindsight.
_________________ The best solutions are sometimes to compromise between two sides.

"I will always place the mission first. I will never accept defeat. I will never quit. I will never leave a fallen comrade."
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