Prologue:

Former Redemed Dark Lord of the Sith Revan sat in the Starboard Dormitory staring down at the Mandalorian mask formerly worn by Darth Revan.
I left them, Bastila, Carth, Mission, Canderous, Zaalbar, and Old Man Bindo, Jolee understood but Mission was even sadder then when Alek scorched Taris.
Bastila was reluctent but understood why but that didnt help that i WILL die on this. Canderous was rebuilding the Mandalorian Clan Ordo, we thought it best not to tell him. He would decide to come and i wouldnt be able to stop him. Zaalbar's Life Debt was released, he didnt beleave i should go alone. but what i did the was horrible.

That place while be full of the Dark Side forever. I wonder if she is still there...
"Bleep?" I looked over and i saw T3 beeping quizingly.
"What is it T3?" I said with a hint of sadness.
"Bleep Bloop!" He said we where there, i ran over to the Cockpit where HK-47 was tapping the controls with the grace of a assassin.
"HK! Whats our status?" HK looked up and said
"Statement:HK-47 ready to serve all ship systems 100% and ready!" He always enjoys this part.
"Prepare Assassination Mode!"
"Statement:Meatbag Disposal System Active!" The term "Meatbag" always annoyed Alek.

When he changed his name to Malak i changed mine to Revan. My real name was forgotten. Washed away when Alek turned on me. Alek always thought i was going soft on the Republic. I preserved and fortified their bases, He never understood what i was doing; I was preparing the Republic for what was to come, the True Sith Empire. The Dark Lord that was banished thousands of years ago. Their leader had preserved himself for thousands of years. He gathered Sith for thousands of years. He has waited for thousands of years. He will wait no more, i sensed them coming, starting their campaign agianst the Galaxy that banished them thousands of years ago. Naga Shadow, his tomb lies. He is alive and seeking Revenge.

I will kill him and slow them down as much as possible. Even if it means using everything i have learned. My death is not a question. HK will help on the fist act of saboutage. Then he will remain on the Ebon Hawk while T3 finds Bastila and tells her im dead and i did as much as i could. To tell her i love her. She told him to spy on me, i talked to him about this. He understands now that she or anyone else cant know where i have been, for their sake. I landed the ship and HK and I got out. A Sith Captain and two Sith Elite Troops walked out to meet us. I sensed in the force two snipers on second cliff to the right. I wonder how well they shoot with their ammo pack just falling out?

"Who are you?" The Sith Captain asked.
"Darth Revan" I lied. I had to convince them of my loyalty. I had to get to their leader at least.
"Ah, this way. We expected you would find us. Welcome to Lehon."



Well this is my first try at a story what do you think?

hm not bad but when is this? after or b4 KOTOR?

I do not know... I hadn't predicted that this would be about Revan, and... Who is Alek?

Alek was Malak before he changed his name, after Kotor 1 and before kotor 2

Ah. What an orignal Darth name, right?

Revan: So, what would you like to call yoursself? I'm gonna' stick to Darth Revan, cuz... Well... It's kinda' my name. Revanchist, and all...

Alek: I wanna' be Darth Malak!

Revan: Malak? That's not even a word! Why not be something like darth tyranus, or ceratus, or something besides a prefix added to your name?

Malak/Alek: Well... cuz... I like it!

Revan: Oh, whatever. For this stupidity, you get to become my apprentice.

Malak: But Reavaaaan..!

Revan: Shutup, you.

Malak: *under his breath* some day I'll kill you...

Revan: Yeah, right.

lol, Revan wasnt his real name though, every Darth has to take up a Sith alias.

Nobody really knows Revan's actual name...

Yea, so thats why i havent expanded on that Chapter I: An Old Friend may come out Monday around 3:00-5:00.

You know guys, "Malak", for us greeks is kinda funny cuz u c, the word that is pronounced:"Malakas" in greek, means something like "asshole" in english.



DARK LORD CHRONICLES CHAPTER 1:A SUITABLE NAME!
Revan:Hey Alek! I'm home!

Malak:Hello there! How was your vacations to Greece?

Revan:great great.You know what? i decided to become a Sith lord!

Malak:Sith lord? Sure why not. Can I be one too?

Revan:You? i dont know.

Malak:Come on! We'll get cool fancy new names! What'll be yours?

Revan:I think i'll make it Revan.

Malak:Revan? thats good. i like it.I'm thinking something like "Darth Destructious" or "Darth Awesome". What do you think?

Revan:Hmmm, Why dont you call yourself:"Darth Malakas"?

malak:"Malakas"? No its too big. How bout "Malak"?

Revan:Yeah I like it!

Malak:Great. So now what?

Revan:Not much, we'll just have to steal half the Republic fleet, find a gigantic-ancient-dark-side-ship-building station and defeat the Republic in all out war!

The entire time I read that, Marios... I imagined Revan texting Malak.

Think about it. He doesn't ever speak, aside from when he sets up mines, or gets hurt. He must be texting his jedi friends, or something. He NEVER speaks!

*Muffled voice without any real speech*

"I'm sorry, what?"

*Revan whips out a text messaging phone.*

"One sith fleet? Right on it..!"


DARK LORD CHRONICLES CHAPTER 2: Muffled voices!

Malak: So, what's next?

Revan: Mffrmmffmfmrmmfmburrmb

Malak: Travel un-characted space routes..? What kind of plan is that!?

Revan: MMFMFMRBMRBDFMFBRMBRMBR..!

Malak: Steal Jedi Apprentices and persuede them to join our side, and we shouldn't forget the one that has the Cyan lightsaber, who's female?

Revan: *furiously* MMMMMFFFFF...MMMMMMRRR...RRRRMMMM...FFFFBBB!!!

Malak: You want me to fire on your ship someday?

Revan: *whips out a texting device, and sends it to Darth Malak*

Malak: Oh! Ice Cream!? Sounds good to me! What flavor?

Revan: *texts Malak again*

Malak: Dark Choclate, with cherries? That's decidedly EVIL! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Revan: Mffrmbrbmm!

Malak: You want me to do all those things I said?

Revan: MMMMMMMRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOO!!!

Malak: Okay. Will do! Let's go get that Ice Cream before I do all that, okay?

Revan: Mmmrfmbrbm...

Malak: With whipped cream? No... Too happy and light...

Revan: /maskpalm



LATER IN ABOUT 4000 YEARS...

Palpatine: Lord Vader... Your treat for attacking the rebel base at Hoth... DARK...CHOCLATE..!

*Vader jumps up and down in glee, and takes the choclate.*

Palpatine: Good bye, and don't forget to renew your handi-cap sticker..!

*Vader nods up and down rapidly*

*Vader opens up Dark Choclate, and tries to eat it. It keeps bouncing off of his respirator.*

Vader: NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

ELSEWHERE IN THE GALAXY...

*Luke calmly chews on White Choclate while flying his X-wing.*

DARK LORD CHRONICLES 3:THE REALIZATION
Battles rages between Republic and Sith forces and the Jedi task force has boarded Revan's ship and is fighting him.Meanwhile on Malak's ship.

Officer:Lord M,M, Ma, Malak I have this messa-

Malak:Why cant you completely tell my name for once? HUH?

Officer:I cant milord. Its too embarrassing.

Malak roars:Why is it embarrassing? isnt it the coolest name EVER?

Officer while trembling:Y-y-yes my lord, its just t-that it means something b-b-bad.

Malak catches poor officer by the throat and yells:WHADAYA MEAN IT MEANS SOMETHING BAD? WHO ARE YOU? WHERE ARE YOU FROM?

Officer:I-i-I am from Greece and my nam-

Malak:I DONT CARE JUST TELL ME WHAT THE NAME MEANS!!!

Officer:It means...a-a-asshole my lord.

Malak:WHAAAAAAAAAT!?YOU'RE NOT SERIOUS!*shakes poor officer like a mouse*

Malak with voice full of venom:It was you Revan, you knew it from the very beginning! Say goodbye to your porn data! ALL GUNS! FIRE ON REVAN'S BRIDGE! DESTROY HIS DATABASE!

Meanwhile on Revan's flagship.
Bastila:You cant escape revan! Give us the DVD back and we'll let you live.

Revan: kukukuku*evil laugh* You really think I'll give it to you?! Everyone in the galaxy will find out about our little "movie" Bastila.*licks his lips*.

Bastila:YOU BASTARD! DONT YOU DARE UPLOAD IT!

Revan:kukuku. Why not? Some might be surprised if they see how skilled you are.kukuku.*evil smile(although he's wearing a mask WTF)*

Bastila:THE MOMENT YOU UPLOAD IT ON THE NET THIS SAME MOMENT YOUR TRUE NAME WILL BE POSTED AT YOUR FAN WEBPAGE!!!

Revan's smile suddenly draining:Lets not make hasty movements ok? I'm sure we can come to am agreement.We're all civilized right?
Revan suddenly feels the incoming blows and their target aqd so do the jedi.

Bastila while running away with the others:GET OUTA HERE ITS GONNA BLOW!

But Revan is running toward the main computer screaming in agony:NOT MY PRECIOUS PORN! I'VE BEEN COLLECTING IT FOR DECADES! MALAK HOW COULD YOU?!

No one heard from him ever again.

Let's stop while we're ahead.

Oh come on.Dont tell me that at least you didnt giggle if not laugh your ass off. I know I did.

I giggled, but this is not our thread.

It is ontopic!

But this is somebody else's story. What right do we have to do this..?

lol its funny, lets call it a spin off shall we?
First Chapter coming VERY SOON

"I see the secluded location hasn't hampered your base's condition any.” I was stalling him so i could catalog weakness', troop counts, mapping out the base, possible exit routes, chokepoints all Tactical information I could gather.
"May i ask where we are going?" I asked innocently.
"Going to see Darth Traya." I stopped walking. Traya?! She was still out here! This has all gone to Thrak! HK saw the surprise and asked
"Query: Are you alright Master?"
"Yes, I’m fine." He will understand eventually. We walked in and I saw Traya's face; surprised. But she quickly washed it away. After all she is The Betrayer.
"Ah, I wasn’t expecting you to still wear that Mandalorian mask upon your face. Come to learn more? Or have you your own purposes for returning?"
I took off my mask. I noticed that the Captain had left without me noticing, I must remember not to let my guard down.
"Ah Kreia, always asking meaningless questions." I smiled.
"Why have you come?"
"To join the True Sith, the Republic got boring."
"Strengthened it enough have you?"
"Its never enough. But I must make due with what I have."
"Yes, the Star Forge was a thing of Rakatan power but Dark Energies were able to thrive. A remarkable thing. When the Republic left we moved right in. The Republic patrols find us every once in a while by accident but they keep the men sharp. They seem to have abandoned this world."
"Well am sure you are in need of rest. And Meditation."
"Right ill be on my way."
"Ill show you your quarters."
He was back but I felt him come in this time, he is very skilled in stealth from the force as well as other senses. I got to my quarters and I noticed they were the same as when I was seeking the Star Forge and our vessel crashed. We talked to the elders and got into the temple. It was time I got back to my Meditation.

(Dream/Memory)
A room, in the Temple, near the top landing pad and the Disruption Terminal, I set it in its berth and sealed it in the wall. I then walked with Malak to the ship and set off to the Star Forge. I remember it was of my creation. My Lightsaber? No, but I cant remember what.

I set off to look for it. A couple guards were troublesome but I cleaned their memory.

A FEW HOURS LATER

I couldn’t find it. I think someone else will find it eventually but I cant.
I guess it’s not for me to find. I returned to my “quarters” and began my Meditation again.

The last part was confusing.What was he looking for?

Have you read Darth Bane: Rule of two? Its his Holocron, it has no more importance in the story so i can tell all of you. Besides that what do you think so far?


I awoke to alarm klaxons blaring and the sound of feet ruffling outside the door. I reached out with the Force and felt Kreia and the Base Commander and a few common troops. I ran out into the hallway and unquestionly HK followed. I looked both ways down the hallway and saw a viewport. I ran towards it looked up to see 6 Hammerhead Class Cruisers and 13 landing craft approaching the base in a Blitz pattern.
“Apparently they haven’t forgotten this world , Kreia.”
“Sir?” I looked over to see the Sith Officer that I first encountered. I ignited both my lightsabers, my Purple in my left and my Red in my right. I slashed his shoulder with the Red and impaled my Purple lightsaber through his back.
“HK, are your Assassin Protocols still active?”
“Statement: Of course Master, I never turned them off.”
I looked down the hallway to my right and saw two Troopers looking at their Captain and raised their weapons. Two scarlet beams flashed at me and I reflected them into their chest and they slumped back against the wall. Still running I told HK to secure the room ahead and wait there. 4 regular Sith Troopers aimed their rifles at the incoming Republic Soldiers. In the middle a Sith Elite Heavy Gunner had a Heavy Repeating Rifle that spewed out more shots than the 4 regulars combined. I watched 2 Sith regulars go down and the farthest one threw a grenade and sent Republic Soldiers everywhere with screams of pain. 2 more regulars went down and after 5 shots the Elite went down. The Republic Commander and his remaining troops rounded the corner and raised their riffles. The Commander waived them away.
“Hold your fire! He’s a Jedi!”
With a snap-hiss I answered.
“I’m no Jedi!” I clutched the Commander and sent him flying to the wall behind him knocking two Troopers down. Still holding on I closed my grasp; crushing his skeleton like a piece of Flismi. The others still in shock stared at their dead Commander and fired beams of scorching death at me. I grabbed another one on the run and sent him cart wheeling through the Republic Soldiers knocking them down or pushing them aside. I ran into their mist slashed two Troopers and gave a massive force push that snapped them all to the wall. They all fell down lifelessly. I ran into the next hallway where more were coming. I threw my lightsaber at the ceiling and cut out some rock and returned my blade. I pulled down the rock delaying their approach. I found HK in the same room I sent him to and it was empty, I said
“That’s why I brought You!”
“”Statement: Glad to be off service Master.”
I told him to secure the ship and T3. He went off with his assignment. I ran through the last corridor and heard a snap-hiss. I stopped and said
“Ah, ambush is it? I’m game.”
“So this is your TRUE loyalty.”
“Enough words, more action, Kreia would not have liked you.”
“Too late.” I caught it just in time to move out of the way of his blade. I felt the heat of his saber guiding past my head. I slashed at his head and left leg, he blocked the headshot and jumped over the leg shot. He made a attempt on my shoulder and failed. I cut his arm and he tried to run but I gripped him and sent him out the 5 story building. I looked over and saw the Sith Marauder lay in a pool of his own blood. I ran into and disposed of a couple Troopers both Republic and Sith. When I got back to the ship HK said
“Statement: Your plan has expired Master. What do you plan to do next?”
“Simple, Infiltrate and kill.”
I headed to the Ebon Hawk to set the next course. When i find it of course.

Its very interesting but chapter one confused me a little.Good jobe nevertheless.

What do you think of Chapter II?

Im working on chapter III but school is getting in the way sorry

Dude dont double post.

You should enter in the competition, suy cuy. In the 'off-topic' section.

oh ok thx, Rep21 it was after SIX days!

Then its okay !

lol,

Whats funny?

nothin...

Perfect ! I was expecting a Story which will give us an insight to what happened to Revan between KOTOR I and KOTOR II. Finally ! Thank you very much and keep on improving the quality !!!

alright, i wont get much done with the competition regrettably but i will try.

Hey, look bud. There's no competition for the best story on here.

It's about who can write an enjoyable one.

ok thx, i will resume after i finish the competition story.